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Hello, I'm the Shaide's brother, yesterday my english teacher said me I must make a poem in this language, I've wroten and I like your opinion.
"where the night never fall down,
the moonlight is the way,
In the depth shadow of my mind,
I always meet with her,
Wish I wait you all time,
because my hope would be the death,
where the night never fall down,
I always meet with her,
Her eyes will be my light,
Her mouth, The hidden treasure of mine,
what would be the heaven
In my head ever shine
Say goodbye to the stars
who envy your sheen
in the depth shadow of my mind
your soul the gloom clean
Where the tears fill the oceans
the moonlight is the way,
I will be looking for
in the thin line between myself"
My english isnt good I know but what must I change?
Thank you for your kindness
Rada
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