View Single Post
Old 11-11-2002, 10:34 PM   #15
antryg
Fzoul Chembryl
 

Join Date: August 30, 2002
Location: Dallas, Tx.
Age: 22
Posts: 1,765
Just blowing off some steam [/qb][/QUOTE]Heh I have an ancient history exam on Thursday - it's three essays of 800-1000 words each in two hours, or 40 minutes an essay. Lucky I write fast [/QB][/QUOTE]
Does this mean that the test itself is a relic or artifact or is it a test on ancient history? Sorry; I couldn't resist. Blame it on too many theology and philosophy courses.
In the same vein, I would posit that belief is not wishy washy but the driving force in humans. Whether it is the scientists belief that there is an answer or the religious persons belief in a reason for life; belief is what causes us to search and strive.

Not knowing exactly what grade level this is for makes it hard to offer a fair evaluation. The advice that others have offered is good no matter the grade level. All of the advice given will make the essay better. If this is for middle school or high school then it is very good within the word constraint.

[ 11-11-2002, 10:39 PM: Message edited by: antryg ]
__________________
antryg is offline