[Sir Mandorallen]

Thanx agian Legolas. Don't worry about not being able to help in this fight. Perhaps another day, if we arn't at each other's throats.

Whacky, I'm just saying THIS part is overdone:

lumbering Behemoths pick out the heavy cavalary and reduce it to bits, as thuderbirds swoop down the sky striking lightning onto Sir M's shock troopers. Just as it seems that Whacky has made his move, an armoured warrior appears from out of thin air, it seems that whacky has called for a favour on his friend, the almighty tempest, which not only prevents Sir M from using the forces of nature against whacky and his forces, but his appearence radiates an aura of sheer power, the earth begins to shake, rain, ice, thunder, lava and fire rain upon Sir M's battered army,

Look at it. Thunderbirds, an almighty tempest, Behemoths?? I would prefer either a battle of just regular troops. (but you must first state their numbers for future reference or a battle of regular troops, with us also have a small number of Asha'man, and you having dragons, that would be pretty even.

Which do you want? If its neither than count me out. (unless you think of something better...)