Thread: La tragédie
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Old 08-25-2002, 04:47 AM   #12
Jerome
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Join Date: January 8, 2001
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Age: 39
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By more abstract, I just mean that this one has "supernatural" elements (not usually my style), and I played much more heavily with symbolism rather than actual narrative in this one. [img]smile.gif[/img]

I have problems with Pomposity at times... I might go through this more than once and strip away all the excess descriptions and what-not... might make it slightly more readable, hopefully. The god's names, I just wanted to play with a little - calling them "love" or "jealousy" in Englsih was mildy uncreative, or so I saw it, and it gave me another 'screen' to hide a layer of meaning behind. Not too sure if that at all trnslated from my mind onto paper though. [img]tongue.gif[/img]

Well, if you think my style is improving, then i'm flattered. Thanks for the comments.
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