here are 3 haiku i wrote please let me know what you all think of them:
To die in the sun
would be a greater honor
if I were still pure?
Ask about weather
What else do you have to say?
You're not even there.
Calm as hindu cows
they all watch the glowing box
Seeing the same thing.
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Now the swinging bridge<br />Is quieted with creepers. . . <br />Like our tendrilled life. -Basho
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