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06-13-2002, 08:45 AM

Nice story.

A few gramatical errors but I don't know if English is your first language so it may not be as bad as it could be.

Sorry if that sounded critical but you did ask [img]smile.gif[/img]

[ 06-13-2002, 08:47 AM: Message edited by: MagiK ]

06-13-2002, 08:45 AM	#3
MagiK Guest Posts: n/a	Nice story. A few gramatical errors but I don't know if English is your first language so it may not be as bad as it could be. Sorry if that sounded critical but you did ask [img]smile.gif[/img] [ 06-13-2002, 08:47 AM: Message edited by: MagiK ]