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Originally posted by Maelakin:
I see an attempt at making a point, but I also see failure to substantiate the claims made within the paper. To be honest, I really don’t understand what you are trying to suggest with this paper. It would be beneficial if you posted an outline for the paper as a reference point if you want actual opinions on the topic material and its presentation.
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There is no outline yet. Pretty much just thoughts typed out at this point.
The paper is on, religions effect geology and geologies effects on religion. There are no points being made just examples of religions effect on geology and geologies effects on religion. Not making any claims either, just reciting some history.
I am looking for any other opinions on which other examples to use.
Thanks : )