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Old 10-11-2001, 03:12 PM   #6
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Horus - Egyptian Sky God
 

Join Date: March 4, 2001
Location: either CA or MO
Age: 43
Posts: 2,674
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Originally posted by Blade:
Great job so far i say. Mabe for a plot how Rusty helps Fayetha stop the abuse? And for the conflict facing whoever is doing it? Just a couple of suggestion that i thought might help. Its a sad topic though to read about IMHO.

.... I've not decided if I should let Rusty help Fayetha stop abusing... that would make a more profound ending, HOWEVER not pleasent

it is a choice I have to make, though to my deepest hope, he should help her through this

anyone else give more suggestions please?


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