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Originally posted by Lioness:
Sure I'll proof it, but I'm not a very good critique.  Feel free to send it though. 
Yeah, where'd everybody go????
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ok, just let me finish this last update and i'll send it! i do a lot of work on it at school... so i have to translate it onto my computer because my handwriting is just atrocious! also it lets me share with my friends what i have
and proofreaders in some other cases... i dont call some of them friends, just proofreaders... (im referring to someone in my b.net guild, i hate him but hes a good writer).
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It's simple. Once the Planet is hurt, it gathers Spirit Energy to heal the injury. The amount of energy gathered depends on the size of the injury...What would happen if there was an injury that threatened the very life of the Planet? Think how much energy would be gathered! Ha, ha, ha. And at the center of that injury, wil be me. All that boundless energy will be mine. By merging with the energy of the Planet, I will be come a new life form, a new existence. Melding with the Planet, I will cease to exist as I am now. Only to be reborn as a 'God' to rule over every living soul.
What are you saying? Are you trying to tell me you have feelings now? Ha, ha, ha... Stop acting as if you're sad. And there's no need to act as if you're angry either. Because, Cloud, you are... a puppet.
Super Sephiroth, slayer of the Uber Fluffy, and battle co-ordionator and defender of the HADB clan.
Follower of the mighty Fallen Paladin himself.
Diplomacy is all and well, but HADB is better!
Head of the IronWorks Intelligence Division
Official Soup Server and bumper of Cloudy's Cafe
Possessor of the Aerie Diamond Head from the ALSB.
Stalking the woodlands,
the Lioness in my sight,
warm feelings doth come,
into my lonely heart