Great story, as I said to you already (on MSN that is), you start of great (you've got talent in my eye) but keep the story straight if you begin like this, don't go and make a hilarious laughing story of it. Keep up the good work
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There's something in your eyes, ah no, I see now, it's the reflection of my deadly gaze - Mirac Honorguard
(Necromancer)
http://www.angelfire.com/rpg2/mirac
Fellow Table Dancer of the Jerome's Table dancer group