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Originally posted by Fljotsdale:
Only one criticism - you need to do a little work on your understanding of English grammer! It will make your work SO much better. Hope you don't mind me mentioning it? 
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no, definately NO. I DONT mind AT ALL
give me some suggestions please?
by the way... the story had nothing to do with duckling, coincident/similarity, maybe, but hardly adaptaion