06-17-2001, 07:26 AM
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Manshoon 
Join Date: May 1, 2001
Location: Demiplane of Shadow
Posts: 248
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Quote:
Originally posted by Fljotsdale:
If you want me to, I can do a rewrite of ONE PARAGRAPH to show you what I mean about sentence structure.
Over to you! 
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be my guest.
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