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Originally posted by AzureWolf:
hehe yeah thats exactly what i wanted to know. thanx for being honest but i think i will have to leave the prolouge in becos it fits well into the storyline even tho you cant tell that yet. but i think i will leave out revalations. so thanx again.
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Yeah, I CAN tell that AzureWolf! It is just that it needs (IMHO!) some serious re-working. If you have no objections, I could e-mail you if (your e-mail is available) and SHOW you what I mean.

You can always ignore advice, lol!
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Smile! Life is too short for bitching!
Fljotsdale
[This message has been edited by Fljotsdale (edited 05-11-2001).]