yeah thats one of the probs of writing stories. trying not to just follow one person the whole way through. I cant be much help, writing i just a hobby for me altho on the suggestions of many teachers and others i think i may start getting into it a bit more seriously.
hey wolfgir there is a newbie on the board and he posted a messg on bg2 forum that noone is replying to
think u could go have a look?
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"I was born of darkness. My fathers eyes closed before mine opened. I am not of this world or the other, and I have the right to be what I am..."