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sylent · 05-08-2001, 07:29 AM

I have only read the start (ie. not chapter 1.)
I like what I have read so far, you have set the scene for a really great story.
I also really love the way you write, the descriptive words and stuff, although it could perhaps get a little tied up if you tried too hard.

I will read the rest another time, when I have more time, but for the meantime, keep it up - as Wolfgir said, you have talent, don't give up

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"Watch your back"

05-08-2001, 07:29 AM	#6
sylent Emerald Dragon Join Date: January 8, 2001 Location: Melbourne, Australia Age: 41 Posts: 948	I have only read the start (ie. not chapter 1.) I like what I have read so far, you have set the scene for a really great story. I also really love the way you write, the descriptive words and stuff, although it could perhaps get a little tied up if you tried too hard. I will read the rest another time, when I have more time, but for the meantime, keep it up - as Wolfgir said, you have talent, don't give up ------------------ "Watch your back"