OK - going to pick this apart - don't take it personally ok, coz it's not. Should be taken as "constructive" rather then the reverse.
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Name: Verrion Sieg
Race: Aasimar
Gender: Male
Class: Paladin of Sune
Alignment: Neutral Good
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Right, the Alignment can only be Good, OR Neutral OR Evil - no combinations therefore of. Sorry if I didn't make this too clear.
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Current xp: 3000
XP until Next Level: 6000
Character Level: Paladin 2
Effective Character Level: 3
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If you've got an ECL of +1, you start at level 1, so that needs fixing. I know I didn't make that too clear, and apologies
The next part's fine
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AC: (natural: 13)
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This will need fixing with both "natural" and a second AC with your armour bonus. Stats are fine too [img]smile.gif[/img]
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Skills:
Skill name total # (ranks # + modifier + stat mod)
Concentration: 6
Bluff: 5
Diplomacy: 7
Heal: 7
Handle Animal: 5
Ride: 5
Knowledge(religion): 3
Knowledge(planes): 3
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Skills, please add the actual rank, then the bonus from any modifiers - i.e. say you were an elf at level 1: "listen 8 (3 + 2 racial + 3 wis)" per example
Ok, and this is where the real problem lies. Your inventory is waaaaaaaaaay too overpowered. I said a
single +1 item, and then spending the remaining gold. With 900gp, there's no way you could afford all that. An armour enchantment of +1 costs 1000gp, as does a shield and a +1 weapon costs 2000gp. Also, any enchanted weapon/armour/shield needs to be +1 to start with if you're enchanting it, so sorry... but please modify it.
Other then that, overall it looks fine [img]smile.gif[/img]