To uss: I was actually going to write something featuring Barney the Dinosaur, but I guess you came first. Well, never mind. [img]smile.gif[/img] Who's B A Barracus by the way?
Also, I think it might perhaps be a good idea to work out your story by putting in a little more detail.
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Gandalf asked B A Barracus in shock, "Did you have to kill those children?"
"If I don't kill them, they'll kill you all," replied Barracus, cracking his white knuckles.
"But they're
children!" protested Luke, looking at the bodies of the children.
"So?" snapped Barracus. "Are you going to just sit down and let them kids bash your brains in? Yes, I know, they're kids, but they're mind-controlled by that Dinosaur, and when you're mind-controlled by him, it's just too bad, you're a goner. You can never regain yourself anymore, you'll forever remain his slave. We had no choice, we had to kill those kids."
"I refuse to believe it," said Gandalf. "Surely there's got to be some way to break the terrible hold you claim that vile creature has on those poor children. And did you have to
kill them? Couldn't we do something like just knock them unconscious or paralyse them instead? Who or what is that vile creature anyway? Where does he come from? Why would he want to do terrible things like making young children kill for him?"
Before Barracus could answer, a booming voice was heard. They recognised it as the voice of the Dinosaur, but it didn't seem to come from any definite direction.
"What are you doing lying there, stupid?" boomed the voice. "
Get up and come back!" Immediately the children got up -- and vanished.
"The children... They aren't dead?" muttered Barracus in surprise. "Barney's power is even greater than I thought... No, this won't do, I must do something about it..."
Barracus dashed off. Luke meant to stop him, but changed his mind.
"How do you like it," sighed Luke. "Just as we set foot here we straight away have to run into some Dinosaur thing that makes young kids kill people, plus a weirdo who kills young kids. And that's not to mention the accident Jar Jar encountered just before we came. Fellas, I have to say I'm really not looking forward to the birthday party anymore after all this..."
"Actuallisa, itsa partly meesa fault toosa," said Jar Jar. "Earlier the Dinosa just asked meesa whether meesa wantsa any free candysa, but I scoldsa him becausa he looksa so stupidsa, so he got madsa..."
When Luke heard this, he got really angry with Jar Jar. "Why did you
provoke him like this? Had you nothing better to do? All he did was ask you if you wanted some candy, he didn't bite you or anything like that! And may I ask just how good-looking you think you yourself are?"
But before he could continue, an elderly hobbit came to them and said, "Greetings!"