Sorry about that, but you haven't really told me anything about ANY NPC's except all that i read from the post, i only thought Gregor Wolfsheim was some big nob who just made a deal with some of those peoples who attacked. I think a little more info on all of the NPC's but without giving away any secrets. I have a suggestion as well, instead of sying nu-uh that cant happen you could just make it so the story carried on by them running away, happening to be some wight/monster thingy, casting improved invisibility etc. O and you world creation is great