Thread: A simple verse.
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Old 02-08-2001, 08:46 PM   #4
Ladyzekke
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I bow to you, sweet Valen. Your words touch my heart and make me smile

May I join in? Although my poem I have selected for this evening is on a different level .

MENTAL ECLIPSE

My free-flowing subconcious swirls Nonsense
Confusion and Fear creat this Vortex
Such an Abundance of Life Forces...
Individually combined in the same Vex,
or should I say Hex?

I confuse myself in my Clarity
Invisibility is a fraud clear as Glass
Forgotten is the seriousness of this Parody
The dreaming future duplicates the Past

Alone I choose the path most Downtrodden
So I am not the killer of the dead Weeds
I've travelled so many miles in such a short Distance
I clearly remember those steps now Forgotten

I work so hard taking a Break
But my dreams always keep me Awake
The obstacles in my way help me Along
In seeing what is right is actually wrong

We swim through this ocean Dehydrated
And after a long day of nothing are Sated
Our lives are normal and our heads are Pounding
As we close our eyes and ignore our surroundings

My trauma is my Triumph
Your sickness is your Savior
The weapons you need on the Outside
All originate from the Inside

Any other poets out there? Please, let's hear it! I myself am going back to my rubber room to eat tapioca.
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