I like it!
Interesting setting, it seems to me (from the fish and chips) that it would be something like modern day times, with a twist of fantasy...
I have yet to read a book that has tackled this style.
You have certainly set up for a very intersting story, I hope you keep it going, it should be interesting if you keep adding parts, because you will no doubt get a lot of input from people on this board, which if you are willing, you can add to your "tale"...
I have considered writing a fantasy story, and have started a number of different ones, but I find it difficult to continue with a steady rate of interest through out.
It is probably best to write out a plot before you start, but I never bothered to do this, have you? I am just wondering where you see this going...
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