It is grammar/spelling as well as making sure the sentence is will understood. Bare in mind the story talks about the past, but I have a tendcy when writing sentences mixing past/present together. Just to warn you though, the story is talking about a previous game..since it is "Devastating Battle - Road To Light" and it is talking about "Devastating Battle". I will try both warlock and dominions. Can you give me your emails so I can send the *.doc? Please don't lose hope on me like what Sslaxx did. If you found my sentence is soo horrible it is because I came from a third world country where education there is bad. Just try to fix it as best as you could and thank you both for volunteering.
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I would like to thank you man sooooooooooooooooooooo much for creating the best maker in my life. IT KICK ASS!! * HUGS * Thank you soo much, thank you so much ^____^*.<p>I can hardly wait to see this program support onlining. Heheheh, imagine if online is supported ^^*.
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