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Variol (Farseer) Elmwood · 10-25-2004, 08:33 PM

I didn't know about the Demon killing thing 'cos I couldn't get far enough into the book.
Pretty sad considering he created the Forgotten Realms.

A similar thing happened when I read "The Meetings Sextett" for Dragonlance. I think it was the Strum Brightblade book (3 or 4 I think) the sentence structure was horrible. I had to struggle through it though.
I even emailed Wizards of the Coast when I read "Dragons of Summer Flame". I gave them some examples of their grammar like "he got up, walked out the door".
They told me this was a "comma splice". I told them it was lousy grammar.

10-25-2004, 08:33 PM	#4
Variol (Farseer) Elmwood Jack Burton Join Date: May 16, 2003 Location: Dartmouth, NS Canada Age: 60 Posts: 5,634	I didn't know about the Demon killing thing 'cos I couldn't get far enough into the book. Pretty sad considering he created the Forgotten Realms. A similar thing happened when I read "The Meetings Sextett" for Dragonlance. I think it was the Strum Brightblade book (3 or 4 I think) the sentence structure was horrible. I had to struggle through it though. I even emailed Wizards of the Coast when I read "Dragons of Summer Flame". I gave them some examples of their grammar like "he got up, walked out the door". They told me this was a "comma splice". I told them it was lousy grammar. __________________ A MAN WHO WANTS FOR NOTHING HAS INFINITE WEALTH. (me)