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Old 11-27-2004, 05:52 PM   #37
Variol (Farseer) Elmwood
Jack Burton
 

Join Date: May 16, 2003
Location: Dartmouth, NS Canada
Age: 60
Posts: 5,634
Ok, I'm going to quote a couple of lines on page 31. These are some of the things that I feel are really not necessary in a book and could at least be wirded a different way!

"And if you must wed him and bed him you will. He smiled at her. I'd let his whole khalasar fvck you if need be, sweet sister, all forty thousand men, and their horses too if that is what it took to get my army.

Unneseccary..
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