Geesh, everyones a critic, haha jus jokin, thanks for the advice.
This is just the first part of what i intend to be a fairly lengthly story, its jus high school, sports, and work take up a lot of my time.
Il revise it som more and get the names right next time.
Also, i didnt intend it to be melodramatic, its jus i wanted people to see the anger building in the main character. The grammar and stuf might be the best its gonna get cus i wouldnt giv this to anyone to edit.
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