Thread: My own work...
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Old 04-07-2004, 04:28 AM   #14
dplax
Jack Burton
 

Join Date: July 19, 2003
Location: an expat living in France
Age: 40
Posts: 5,577
I only noticed one mistake:
Quote:
The half-elf smiled again and wondered out towards the opening,
Here it should be wandered instead of wondered.
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