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Old 03-06-2004, 10:55 PM   #9
dplax
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Just read it and I can tell you that it is good. I am looking forward to seeing some more of it. So far I saw no outstanding problems other than those already mentioned, there were just a few places where words or phrases were repeated too close to each other.
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