LOL, I did base it upon Salvatore...sorry! [img]smile.gif[/img]
Thanks for the reviews! Chapter 2 will be up soon, I think it'll have to be in 2 parts as it is far longer than the first one....and I will take your advice into account, Ross. As I'm re-writing the Prologue anyway I'll change that part slightly. Thanks for pointing it out! Please continue to point out other flaws, it's one of the ways I'll learn.
Thanks again! I really appreciate it!
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