[RoSs_bg2_rox]

hey that is pretty awesome Slicer, at first it reminded me of Salvatore, but after a bit it started to swing into a different style, your own style! The only thing that I picked out that you might want to change is this bit.

"They were custom crafted only for Leg’Arith and few other than him can wield them effectively. They were pale silver, made of mithril and enchanted under the haunting glow of the moon. The enchantment gives them heightened durability and sharpens their edge, making them more effective to cut through armour. They are incredibly balanced and light, perfect for dual-wielding."

I just didnt think the bit in bold fitted in with the rest of the story, not that it was bad, just the way you wrote it. I mean it seems to be in a different tense, or first person instead of third person like the rest of the story.

Other than that, brilliant so far. When will chapter 2 be coming?