Heya! I don't often visit this forum, but now I have reason too!
Anyways, the point is, I have begun writing my own story and I want you people to gimme feedback. You know, just some criticisms etc, preferably constructive. [img]tongue.gif[/img] It's up on fictionpress.com, and I'd appreciate if anyone could leave a review on the site, where it says submit review at the bottom of the page.
The story is
here.
Please do not feel pressured to read it! Oh, it's a fantasy style story, and in a world that I created. There, see, that'll put some of you off...anyways, I really appreciate any feedback, feel free to post under this topic too, but as I said, 'tis only a humble request. [img]smile.gif[/img]
Cheers guys!