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Originally posted by YeRFDoG:
Thank you all!!
Especially Legolas for *very* helpful criticism 
I value what you posted and see the point
Btw i will break it into proper paragraphs
So... do u want me to post more or can someone else post some of their original work??
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I have a beginning of a book (few paragraphs) I'd like some input on, so I'll post it soon. Until then - post more of yours if you like.
And Legolas, post yours, too!
If we all keep this up, we'll need to join up on Kaz's OUaP site!