Correction, after reviewing previous posts I have back peddled through the story and done something a writer such as myself cannot enjoy doing, editing someone elses work. It is an interesting premise and does make for an neet plot twist, but for a writer its slightly criminal. Anyway, it doesn't seem to help. Even with the knight, the wizard, a dire bear, a pseudodragon, a skeleton chiefton and Xanos we still get beaten to a pulp. Where's my local weatherman when I need him.
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