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Very nice [img]smile.gif[/img] . I am assuming you are basing the actions of the character on the infamous (and definitely missing) Moiraine Sedai from Robert Jordan's series? If so, you have done a good job of capturing her general disposition. The story is right down the line of what I remember the last time I went to the Crypt so I was right with you [img]smile.gif[/img] . You might want to drop a bit of the repetitive "Moiraine Sedai" 's and just call her Moiraine.... other than that ----> Good Job!
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