Thread: Storyline Woes
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Old 02-26-2001, 02:13 AM   #18
Elara
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Join Date: February 28, 2001
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Well folks, the storyline had wandered a bit (and very entertainingly) while our heroes were sorting themselves out. And now it seems there's agreement here to place their focus forward. ■And, first things first.. Ukabu Brew! ■At least that's my vote.

Moni, so sorry to hear of your grandfather's trials. Hope he feels well, soon. I know it's tough on you and your family too, the traveling, the worry and all. Seeing all get better..

adam
I do agree that the thread should be posted under your name. This is why the highlight on the post header has your name added. But by the time I posted I had lost sight of placing the header at the top of the post inside, that it was a continuation of your storyline thread. Instead, my note lay incomplete and buried at the bottom. Am sorry about the oversight, was just so tired by that time that my acuity had gone into stasis. ■*rueful smile*

So.. how about this suggestion: I'll work on making corrections and ommissions on the synopsis, and when it's completed, send it to you for when you assemble your storyline continuation on the new forum. That will put it back where it's belonged all along. ■If this suits you, give me a yea please, and I'll get busy in the meantime. ■

Question for all you fable rousers :

Is the synopsis too dense to be easily assimulated? ■When culling and compacting the story, it hurt to cut out all those great eyeviews of everyone who wrote it.. but maybe I've got too much detail? ■What do you think?

And of even more importance to the storyline is, are there more corrections, ommissions, and general acts of blunder of mine to be rectified? *ulp*

If there are things that concern you, leave 'em here and I'll check back and see what the concensus is, if that's all right.

Night, oh, nope, early morning, for now..
Elara
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