Greetings everyone,
I'm really confused as to all of these posts about the storyline. The story itself seems to have over expanded into a collection of threads going in all directions. I really liked the idea of just having the adventurers going after the Ukabu brew, that alone was one adventure that would lead to another.
I think its great that everyone can contribute, but I think there are WAY WAY WAY too many things going on in the story. I think that one quest at a time is enough, perhaps all who write can help contribute to just one main thread?
If I read the story now, honestly I know what the @#$#$#$ is going on! Its really confusing and I had not wanted to write more until I saw that Elara had worked hard to clear some things up (again, thank you!).
I certainly would like to continue the tale of the Dragon Ukabu Brew, but can we not finish up that adventure first? I thought, once our heroic party solved that quest, THEN Shinwiki would present them with a new quest, ie then maybe they go to the Serpent Temple.
I just feel there are too many threads going on...and while everyone is welcome to contribute, I really loved the humorous aspect of the story and the idea of going for some killer Toad booze. I tried to keep that funny element going, but having it lead in one direction towards the Toads, not all over the place in utter chaos!
Like for instance, if I were to introduce a new character that was an opening for Wyv to step in (such as Monyka), it is totally lame to have someone stick daggers in her eyes before she can introduce herself (that really irked me something fierce!). And having a Gnome who loves ladies boots, well we all know who that was for! There is an undercurrent going here in the story, so if you're a newbie here, feel free to ask some of the forum veterans as they can tell you whats going on!
Maybe Wyv, Moni, Elara, one of you could be a story moderator....Wyv maybe we should move it to the forum?
I apologize if I seem anal retentive here, but I thought this was a great idea by Adam Mage, (perhaps he should be in charge, being that is his idea!!!), but its gotten way out of hand for me to want to write anymore....
Thoughts, answers, comments?
Scronan
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