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Originally posted by Galadria:
All right, Attalus has finally convinced me to post my Romanced Same-Sex Ending, version 6.o1. I don't like it, and I would appreciate help.
After (charname)'s refusal to become a god, she returned to Candlekeep with Imoen and Uriel. Uriel grew tall and fair, to their delight, but persistent rumors that the Red Wizards of Thay were plotting to kidnap Uriel for their own ends caused them to flee secretly with her and continue her education among the elves. Then, one day before Uriel's 18th birthday, Solar appeared to them and revealed that (charname)'s godly destiny was to be imbued in Uriel. They are now roaming the land, adventuring and seeking the destiny of the child that they love.
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That's really good! I like it a lot, but are you a perfectionist?

you never seem to be happy with your work...