[Andyr]

It's a nice idea to have a warrior devoted to a deity like Talos, but I don't like some aspects of this kit.

Advantages: Priest of talos. +1 attack at levels 15 and 25. +1 to thaco each 5 levels.

These aren't very Talos-oriented. They'd better fit Tempus, Lord of Battles. Perhaps something like Destructive Blow, Storm Shield, Lightning Bolt?

Disadvantages: weapon usage is restricted to maces only.

Why mace? Talos' favoured weapon is the short spear. I don't see why only maces would be allowed. Surely he'd encourage his warriors to specialise in all weapons to better allow them to destroy things?

Each 10 levels must perform some "vile deed" that should be known to all.(killing an innocent in the middle of a market square, for example). Reputation may not exceed allowed value per level. If it does the stormfighter loses his status permamently.

A 'Fallen' status if your reputation is too good is a nice idea. It'd probably be a lot easier to put it at a blanket value of, say, 14 though for all levels.

Initial max value of constitution is restricted to 14. Initial value of carisma may not exceed 4.

Why?

Must destroy temple of lathander before reaching level 21.

I'd suggest perhaps giving them the Talos temple stronghold instead. So the destruction of Lathander's temple would be part of their stronghold quest.

Only humans may be Stormfighters.

Why?

May not dual class.

This could be a good restriction, showing the warrior must be dedicated solely to his purpose. However, a dual-class to Mage or Thief could be interesting - imagine a Stormfighter who then becomes a Mage, to better cast destructive spells.