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You're not bad at all, Dundee. [img]tongue.gif[/img] May I give some suggestions? There aren't any real grammatical/spelling mistakes, just puncutation and 'little' things like that.
[ 08-08-2004, 08:05 PM: Message edited by: Assassin ]
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In The Terminator, Sarah Connor is told a speech by John Connor\'s father that John has given in the future. When John is born, Sarah tells John this speech, and John grows up to tell it in the future. So who wrote the speech?!
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