[Jerr Conner]

Still working on the Bryan Romance, but meanwhile I need some opinions on two pieces of his starting equipment:

Ring of Invisibility - The Ancient's Ring

This ring was a gift to the gaurd who was spiritually bound to the tomb of his King, in another plane known as Ravenloft. The guard swore an oath to his dying king that he'd guard his tomb until the night his decendant claimed the King's armor and sword. A wizard cast a bonding spell, and three-hundred years later, the decendant came and claimed his heirlooms. With his service done, the Ancient's body dematerialized. The long contact with that spectre has embued this particular ring with the ability to turn a person invisible once a day. The spell is dispelled when the person makes an attack. In it's history, the decendent used the ring to sneak into an encampment and assassinate a local warlord threatening the people. How this ring came to this plane remains a mystery.

Abilities: Casts Invisibility once a day, +1 to armor class (Upgradeable)

Coral Chainmail +2

Much like the suits of Sylvan Chainmail, this Coral Chainmail is made for specifically by the Coral Elves. Bryan recieved this particular suit of armor as payment in exchange for writing a song for a Coral Elf Lord. This armor can only be worn by Bryan, since it was specifically made to fit him.

Equipped Abilities: Can cast Immunity to Missiles once a day, 25% Fire Resistance (Upgradeable)


Anyway I could improve them without over-powering?

Also, for the Upgrades, I know that with the Coral Chainmail +2 (Which I want to appear Blue on Bryan), that will be upgraded in ToB using the Sylvan Chainmail +2. I'm thinking of simply calling it Bryan's Armor +4 (Part Blue, Part Green), with the same Bio for it but an added paragraph. However, what should it do? Sure, it'd have the same abilities it does now, but how much of an increase in those abilities? I'm also thinking of having it cost 20000 gold to upgrade. (I know upgrading the Elven Chain +4 is already a 40000 gold cost) Should I have any other components needed? (Excluding the Bladesinger Chain)

The Ring can be upgraded with a Rogue Stone. Should that be a +2 armor bonus and improve invisibility? Or something else?