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Old 04-11-2004, 08:25 PM   #6
Illumina Drathiran'ar
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Pirengle was correct with her advice. Otherwise it is good.
But I have one nitpick (Don't I always?)
Carsomyr is a semi-sentinent sword. I don't think it would allow itself to be used to slay an innocent, in a similar way a moonblade is unable to shed innocent blood.
That's the only thing I have to say, though. That's quite impressive.
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