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Originally Posted by DrowArchmage
Jason did his best not to flinchas Nivram hit the ground. Then, suddenly, he felt very tired. He tried to shake it off but he couldnt. He looked toward Iskola for askance, then he passed out.
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Errr, DAM, I had to google what askance meant and it really does not make any sense in this context. Could you clarify?
Also, I think you might have misjudged what Isokla's and Nivram's action consequences against Jason are...he has a severed jugular and probably at least a dozen puncture wounds in the torso. Unless, if by feeling tired you were trying to roleplay
the reaction to those wounds then you might not have realised their gravity.