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Vaskez · 09-01-2005, 06:36 PM

LOL G, not bad for someone who's never battled before. But nowhere near "good" standard

But if that's your first, then you're already better than most newbs at rapbattles.

Oh and thanks for the props, others liked that one too [img]smile.gif[/img]

Anyway, the key to a good verse is wordplay and coming up with new stuff.

A punch from my latest battle:

I already won this, kid can't decide whether to post or run
But how ya in two minds...when ya barely got enough brains for one?

^^see use well-known expressions to change their meaning and diss

[ 09-01-2005, 06:42 PM: Message edited by: Vaskez ]

09-01-2005, 06:36 PM	#48
Vaskez Takhisis Follower Join Date: April 30, 2001 Location: szép Magyarország (well not right now) Posts: 5,089	LOL G, not bad for someone who's never battled before. But nowhere near "good" standard But if that's your first, then you're already better than most newbs at rapbattles. Oh and thanks for the props, others liked that one too [img]smile.gif[/img] Anyway, the key to a good verse is wordplay and coming up with new stuff. A punch from my latest battle: I already won this, kid can't decide whether to post or run But how ya in two minds...when ya barely got enough brains for one? ^^see use well-known expressions to change their meaning and diss [ 09-01-2005, 06:42 PM: Message edited by: Vaskez ] __________________ Too set in his ways to ever relate If he could set that aside, there'd be heaven to pay But weathered and aged, time swept him to grave Love conquers all? Damn, I'd say that area's gray