Just wrote myself some new lyrics for a song I'm writing. I was just wondering what you guys thought of it. Mind you, I haven't checked it thoroughly - yet - for any grammatical flaws or spelling errors, so if you find anything horrifying, just blame on the Engrish
Ms Bright Eyes
You buried me under a thousand of feathers
Picking them off me one by one
By abiding my time I thought myself clever
Thinking I had already won
Ooh no-no
You made me surrender, made me a victim
Oh, won't you give me a headstart, please
If I were to win this would you just listen
No, please, don't turn the other cheek
Hmm
Well, excuse me, Ms Bright Eyes
Can you spare me just one glance?
Although I may have missed out once or twice
This time I'm sure I'll dance
Hmm yea-eah
I sat down to watch you travelling slowly
Dispersing sunlight on your path
I wasted too many hours counting the minutes
Waited too long to find you back
Caught up in silence I hear myself whisper
I shouldn't be chasing butterflies
Instead of just wandering out in the distance
I should be right there by your side
Well, excuse me, Ms Bright Eyes
Can I steal a look or two?
Although I may have missed out once or twice
This time I'll dance with you
Hmm yea-eah
I take a breath
And plunge into
The deep end
Of the swimming pool
I think it's time
To let it show
I swear that I'm...
Ready to go, Ms Bright Eyes
Can you see me standing there?
Although I may have missed out once or twice
This dance, I'm sure, I'll share
With you yea-eah
[ 05-18-2005, 11:29 AM: Message edited by: Link ]