It seems you have not taken my project too seriously, it has been beyond friday and I have not received the result. I am afraid this can't do. Sorry, I truly thank you for accepting, but I need someone else to take over.

Is anyone willing to take over and help fix grammar/spelling error of my game. As a reward you guys could beta test it, it would be great also because you could tell me what part of the game you hate and what part of the game you like.

* Feels extremly sad * Sorry Sslax, I truly would have loved it if you were in the team but I guess it is not ment to be. In any hand can you at least send me the *.doc that I send you so I can send it around? Thanks.

Hey Foody,

I'll have a crack at it, I can't guarantee that I'll get it all done by whenever you want it done, but I will do my best and send you whatever I have been able to do for you if you like.

I can read over the documentation but as for time to play the game, well I am starting a full time job soon so I may not be able to assist with that.

Cheers

Warlock

That would be great, I just don't want you to do what Sslaxx did. I gave him everything to start working on the thing and he had not contacted me for a month. The game has been at halt for a full blown month while other people have developed their game. Then I received an email from him saying "IMPROVE YOUR ENGLISH!!"...will DUH!!! If I was good at english would you think I would be under the mercy of people?

So I ask you this, are you going to put me at halt for another month and point the obvious?

[ 04-22-2002, 08:31 AM: Message edited by: foody ]

Hi Foody,

Honestly, I won't put you on hold for a month, I would give you progress reports and updates on the documentation so that you could make changes as I find them - I would give you an update about once a week.

Like most people on this forum I have a job and a busy life, but wherever possible I try to help out.

Cheers

Warlock

Is it just grammer you need checking, foody?
I might be able to help, but I'd like to know what I'm volunteering for first [img]smile.gif[/img] .

It is grammar/spelling as well as making sure the sentence is will understood. Bare in mind the story talks about the past, but I have a tendcy when writing sentences mixing past/present together. Just to warn you though, the story is talking about a previous game..since it is "Devastating Battle - Road To Light" and it is talking about "Devastating Battle". I will try both warlock and dominions. Can you give me your emails so I can send the *.doc? Please don't lose hope on me like what Sslaxx did. If you found my sentence is soo horrible it is because I came from a third world country where education there is bad. Just try to fix it as best as you could and thank you both for volunteering.

Hey Foody,

I have sent an email to your email address so that you can send me the stuff.

Cheers

Warlock

Sending you my email address as well, foody. [img]smile.gif[/img]

I've received the files you sent me, foody. Good grief! Quite a bit to do, but not impossible:). Don't get too impatient as it will take a while to go through (give it a few days aleast).

Bye!

Hey guys,

I have started work on the first level text file, lots to do but I manage [img]smile.gif[/img]

Hopefully this won't cause you to double up on the work dominions

Cheers

Warlock