This is the second story I have ever seriously written. And this is a fanfic I wrote in the upcoming Xbox game Fable. And if you are more interested in the game the site is alter-ego.net

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/7382292/

Please point out some faults. (I know there is some!)

Also I later will post up some of my drawings.

hurry up wqith the drawings!!!

.heh no really hurry up

and yeah the story is awesome, and i'm sure everyone would like to see the first one too eh [img]graemlins/hehe.gif[/img] :3

like i've said b4 it's a great story, i can't find anything wrong with it [img]smile.gif[/img]

Oy!! There surely haas to be more than one person who has an opinion about this!