I have realized that many Ironworks members do not frequent the forum Deathmage's Realms. If you do, then you have probably have already read my story. If you do not, you probably haven't. Anyway, because I was told to throw the link out of my sig, I am posting a link Here . I have not finished the whole story yet, but I'm getting there. ;) Read what I have so far, I hope you like it!

[ 09-07-2002, 02:23 PM: Message edited by: Willard ]

Well? Did anyone read it? If you did, post how you liked it!

Have you checked out the RP-forum Willard - there is always room for a creative writer (and everybody else)

P.S. Didn't read the story - is it 23:15 over here and I too tired to read all that.

Ok, thanks, I'll do that. Do read it though, when you get the chance.

Again lol Willard i have read the story 2 times and it is great so peoples on IW read it it is wery great!! [img]tongue.gif[/img]

*BUMP* More people need to read this story!

Well, I will look anyway. Just hope its not too long.

Very good. very interesting. :D

Read it! Read It! Reeeaaaddddd iiittttt!!

Very good. But a suggestion- it seems Almun is doing everything, and Bertie just sort of sits and is helped out by Almun. I know Al is the protagonist, but Bertie should still do some stuff. But that is a great story! Write mor soon, please! [img]smile.gif[/img]

But bertie does do stuff! He saves Almun's butt in that cave! [img]tongue.gif[/img]

Great story i'm eagerly awaiting the rest of it. [img]smile.gif[/img]

Willard= Future Writer, more famous than Tolkien and Rowling combined. Thats the only way to describe your talent Willard. Keep up the good work.

But Almun is the one who cut the rope and untied Bertie...?

BTW, what are the emoticons in this place? I know [img]smile.gif[/img] and :( but that's it.

At the top of the page there is a "Graphics Library" button. Go there, and you'll find all of the emoticons and how to use them. [img]graemlins/blueblink.gif[/img]

Edit: Thanks Secretmaster! I thought Bertie cut Almun's ropes though...... I'll go check.

Edit again: Yeah, Almun cut Bertie's ropes in the cave, but only because he did not have a blindfold on.

[ 09-09-2002, 08:55 PM: Message edited by: Willard ]

You really should look into getting it published once it's finished... I think it'll be really good. [img]smile.gif[/img] BTW, now I know how to use smileys! Thanks! :D [img]graemlins/hehe.gif[/img]

Uh oh........ [img]graemlins/jawdrop.gif[/img] :(

What if someone steals my story and says it's theirs? It's not copyrighted.......

It's slighty fast-paced, and perhaps a little 'hasty' at times, but I'm hardly qualified to criticise.

Keep writing, and perhaps someone with slightly more authority on these things can give you more of a help. [img]smile.gif[/img]

Ohhh..... *makes note to self* Write slower. Get professional help. *stops writing* Okay, but where can I find someone that is a real good writer and that can teach me?

Not nessecarily teach you, just give you some guidence about what to do, or who to take it to if you are considering publishing. This is a writers forum that several people from IW frequent, as well as others. Perhaps posting a topic or two there might find you someone to help you, though it;s only a suggestion. [img]smile.gif[/img]

I'm not considering publishing dude. I'm just writing this story for fun, and so far it's been that. The people on that board told me to erase the "he" s and stuff. How would I "slow it down" ? Put an extra space between every word? [img]tongue.gif[/img]

Ooo, a forum for buddng writers! [img]smile.gif[/img] There's a large contingent of writing-types at IW... at last we see where they meet. There's some wonderfully written stuff here, folks.