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<font color=white> I need your help guys, on my english.. storywriting and stats for this katana I made up (I will use it eventually... just need to find someone that can make it for me [img]smile.gif[/img] )
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I just wanted to have katana with a personal touch and some history... I looked at several Katana descriptions in the game (CF, Sanchu, Malakar, Dakkon) And came up with this story... rather simple english.. and literally filled with typos ect. Okay enough about my bad english... I need some stats to give this sword, maybe some edits to it's story... and another name, because Sortaghion is so common (i think [img]graemlins/1ponder.gif[/img] ) I know this is allot to ask... but I would really... like really appreciate some comments about it.. because it took me awhile to make it. I'm looking forward to see all your reactions... [img]graemlins/hehe.gif[/img] </font> [ 04-05-2003, 12:30 PM: Message edited by: Annatar ] |
Good story!
But, um...it's English, not Englisch :D Good to see you back on IW-apparently we had the same problem ;) |
<font color=white> Hi to you Kaltia, you had the same problem, did you?
I hated it, it took me 3 days, trying and pure frustration to get me up again... and then... it worked... :eek: ! You like the story? thx :D I just need some stats... and someone willingly to create it for me, so that I can actually play with it, in BG II that is [img]graemlins/saywhat.gif[/img] </font> |
I've crossed out typos and errors and replaced them with the correct spelling.
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Regeneration 10% vorpal chance of frightening the target per round. [ 04-05-2003, 01:51 PM: Message edited by: Kaltia ] |
<font color=white> Thx for the fix! nice of you to do this.. ;)
- Regen: Because of the wound inflicted by Kerilioco, disappeared before his eyes, suggesting Regeneration (bond with the souls within the blade) - Vorpal hit: Due to the decapitation of Kerilioco at the end, how obvious . [img]smile.gif[/img] - Fear?, maybe because the anger and hate the blade barrer shows towards his enemy... and the amazing regen rate.... that it seems the barrer cannot be killed due to this? let me know... :D </font> |
If you're going to make it uber, then slip some penalties on as well-like -2wisdom, or charisma.
I think you can dl an item-making kit from teambg. |
In my opinion, change the Vorpal to 5% (the Axe of Unyielding, IIRC, is only 10%), Regen to 2/round, and a chance to use Cloak of Fear twice a day.
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Little correction on Kaltia's correction :)
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There are several run-on sentences in the description too (e.g. Quote:
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With a name like grammar, why am I not surprised :D
My computer crashes once every ten minutes, so I had to rush. |
<font color=white> Okay here is the error/typo free version of the story.
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Statistics so far: Equipped Abilities - Regeneration (1 hp/2sec) - Immunity to fear - Cloak of fear - +2 AC bonus - 12+ Max HP (1 hp for every member of the Kiro No Cen, 12 members were killed in the village) - gain 2 extra attacks per round Combat Statistics - 10% chance of draining 1 Charisma point of target. - 10% of vorpal hit - 15% chance of Wraith of the Death (inflicting 12 magic damage, no save) THACO: +5 bonus Damage: 1d10 +5 Weight: 12 Requires: - 15 Strength - 14 Wisdom - 15 or higher Reputation, loss of reputation causes the blade to disappear, finding an other Kensai worthy enough to wield this blade. Only Usable by: Good alignment Kensai, Kensai-->Dual classed Using the Celestial Fury +3 avatar in inventory and the Rainbow Sword +5 in-game blade (color changing Forgotten Wars Item Pack katana) A nice katana, and rather powerfull... though useless when your not playing a Kensai. Thoughts... edits.... fixes... anyone? </font> [ 04-06-2003, 10:54 AM: Message edited by: Annatar ] |
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