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Elif Godson 09-22-2001 11:38 PM

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You done good, if you wrote this at such a young age I can only
imagine what may come from you later. Keep it up.

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Slayer of Pest's in Cloudy's Cafe':knight:

Jafin 09-23-2001 12:35 AM

Lioness... This is amazing, very powerful. It is done amazingly well. You have a gift for writing. As I read your story, I nearly cried. I almost never cry, especially from a writing or some other sort of work of fiction. Lioness, I commend you. This is an amazing work. It's also somewhat frightening. What would a world without love, hope, and companionship be like? Exactly what you wrote. It's very moving. Thank you for sharing this.

-Jafin

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Jerome 09-23-2001 08:50 AM

*cough cough* BUMP *cough cough*

Well i'll be dammed, how did this get back up here? http://www.ironworksforum.com/ubb/no...miles/wink.gif

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Within the jungle of my deepest emotion,
With a coat resplendant in a golden sheen,
Swiftly hunting my tender love,
Stalks the regal, Feline Queen

Lioness 09-23-2001 09:20 AM

Thanx dear. http://www.ironworksforum.com/ubb/no...iles/smile.gif And I stink at soccer. http://www.ironworksforum.com/ubb/no...iles/smile.gif (Well, I've never played it, but...)


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Ramon de Ramon y Ramon 09-23-2001 09:35 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Jerome:

Hmm, skilled with words, charming, mature.... is there no end to this girls talents? http://www.ironworksforum.com/ubb/no...miles/wink.gif

Yes, indeed, Jerome, it is way too late to run and hide, she has got your number - and with each hidden talent she reveals she will only entangle you more and more into her web. http://www.ironworksforum.com/ubb/no...es/biggrin.gif http://www.ironworksforum.com/ubb/no...miles/wink.gif

Silky-Paws: compared to you Isaac Asimov was just an ignoramus and bungler ! http://www.ironworksforum.com/ubb/no...miles/wink.gif http://www.ironworksforum.com/ubb/no...iles/smile.gif http://www.ironworksforum.com/ubb/no.../xyxthumbs.gif

(But maybe, if you really want to take up writing as a regular activity, instead of listening to me, the notorious flatterer and teaser, you should listen more to someone like our cherished Miss Fljotsdale who offers you such a wonderfully balanced feedback of constructive criticism and well-deserved praise. http://www.ironworksforum.com/ubb/no...iles/smile.gif )

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So long !

R³ aka "The Ramonster"(thanks Sir Tainly) - proud to be the official spokesman for the most noble Lady Bilqis, Desert Rose of Ironworks

Btw, the cow is queuing in the slaughterhouse right now !

Lioness 09-23-2001 09:37 AM

Thank You R3! http://www.ironworksforum.com/ubb/no...iles/smile.gif *hugs*
Maybe, I don't feel like writing just yet.

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Waitress at Cloudy's Cafe
Bestest Mate of the Cyan Knight
Lady of Jerome, The Fallen Paladin
Honored Friend of the Warrior SSJ4Sephiroth, and the Arch-Mage Jafin
PeaceKeeping Force, Intelligence Division

Jerome 09-23-2001 09:43 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Lioness:
Thanx dear. http://www.ironworksforum.com/ubb/no...iles/smile.gif And I stink at soccer. http://www.ironworksforum.com/ubb/no...iles/smile.gif (Well, I've never played it, but...)



Well, we're not perfect.... though I'm willing to make a exception for yourself... http://www.ironworksforum.com/ubb/no...miles/wink.gif


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Within the jungle of my deepest emotion,
With a coat resplendant in a golden sheen,
Swiftly hunting my tender love,
Stalks the regal, Feline Queen

Ramon de Ramon y Ramon 09-24-2001 10:02 AM

I most firmly believe that our Silky-Paws deserves to be "stroked" some more for this fine piece of work ! http://www.ironworksforum.com/ubb/no...miles/wink.gif

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So long !

R³ aka "The Ramonster"(thanks Sir Tainly) - proud to be the official spokesman for the most noble Lady Bilqis, Desert Rose of Ironworks

Btw, the cow is queuing in the slaughterhouse right now !


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