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Sever 03-09-2003 12:27 AM

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Originally posted by Charlie:
Oddly, I write my poetry with musical lyrics half in my mind....weird no?

Don't you mean 'Weird? No.'

Nice lyrics/prose, Charlie. [img]graemlins/thumbsup.gif[/img] But when i first read the title, i thought you were for real. [img]graemlins/1ponder.gif[/img]

Kakero 03-09-2003 01:25 AM

even thought of making an album? with the talent of yours you can make lots of money.

sylent 03-09-2003 05:36 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Charlie:
I did.
Thats amazing man.
Touched on a note I've been pondering for far too many days now.
Glad you shared that, I'm both touched and impressed [img]smile.gif[/img]

Mojo 03-09-2003 09:58 AM

It strikes me as more poetic than lyrical, but I feel it would work well either way. I'm in awe...do you write often? If not, you should...

RevRuby 03-09-2003 04:35 PM

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Originally posted by /)eathKiller:
man... they aughta' make a poetry/free writing forum so folks like you wont have their stuff bumped around so often... Great stuff [img]tongue.gif[/img]
i tried to have a vote for one and instead my thread was hijacked and i was told to go here:

http://www.bratgirlcentral.com/cgi-b.../ikonboard.cgi

Oblivion437 03-09-2003 05:58 PM

Well, don't quit your day job, whatever it may be, as you aren't going to get rich any time soon.

Mouse 03-10-2003 03:48 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Oblivion437:
Well, don't quit your day job, whatever it may be, as you aren't going to get rich any time soon.
Oblivion, I have checked the ToS with regard to the obove statement and though I can't find anything specific that it breaches, I do consider it to be dismissive, mean-spirited and somewhat hurtful in it's tone and content.

If you want to critique the poem, by all means do so, and I'm sure the author will value your input, but I would ask that you refrain from such condescending put-downs in future.

LordKathen 03-10-2003 04:24 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Mouse:
</font><blockquote>Quote:</font><hr />Originally posted by Oblivion437:
Well, don't quit your day job, whatever it may be, as you aren't going to get rich any time soon.

Oblivion, I have checked the ToS with regard to the obove statement and though I can't find anything specific that it breaches, I do consider it to be dismissive, mean-spirited and somewhat hurtful in it's tone and content.

If you want to critique the poem, by all means do so, and I'm sure the author will value your input, but I would ask that you refrain from such condescending put-downs in future.
</font>[/QUOTE]Really, not cool man... [img]graemlins/redbite.gif[/img]

Kaltia 03-10-2003 05:25 AM

I just saw the new avatars and had the fright of my life :eek:

Did you have fun, Charlie? If you're on the run, I'll let you stay in my garage! :D
Nice poem btw.
Oblivion, did you you were joking but it came out wrong? Happens to us all if it does. Still sounds mean, but oh well.

Nachtrafe 03-10-2003 09:09 AM

Awesome poem Charlie(a rude comment or two notwithstanding).

[img]graemlins/thumbsup.gif[/img] LOL You and Yorick should collaborate some day. The way he continent hops, you both should have the opportunity at some point. :D


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