But bertie does do stuff! He saves Almun's butt in that cave! [img]tongue.gif[/img]

Great story i'm eagerly awaiting the rest of it. [img]smile.gif[/img]

Willard= Future Writer, more famous than Tolkien and Rowling combined. Thats the only way to describe your talent Willard. Keep up the good work.

But Almun is the one who cut the rope and untied Bertie...?

BTW, what are the emoticons in this place? I know [img]smile.gif[/img] and :( but that's it.

At the top of the page there is a "Graphics Library" button. Go there, and you'll find all of the emoticons and how to use them. [img]graemlins/blueblink.gif[/img]

Edit: Thanks Secretmaster! I thought Bertie cut Almun's ropes though...... I'll go check.

Edit again: Yeah, Almun cut Bertie's ropes in the cave, but only because he did not have a blindfold on.

[ 09-09-2002, 08:55 PM: Message edited by: Willard ]

You really should look into getting it published once it's finished... I think it'll be really good. [img]smile.gif[/img] BTW, now I know how to use smileys! Thanks! :D [img]graemlins/hehe.gif[/img]

Uh oh........ [img]graemlins/jawdrop.gif[/img] :(

What if someone steals my story and says it's theirs? It's not copyrighted.......

It's slighty fast-paced, and perhaps a little 'hasty' at times, but I'm hardly qualified to criticise.

Keep writing, and perhaps someone with slightly more authority on these things can give you more of a help. [img]smile.gif[/img]

Ohhh..... *makes note to self* Write slower. Get professional help. *stops writing* Okay, but where can I find someone that is a real good writer and that can teach me?

Not nessecarily teach you, just give you some guidence about what to do, or who to take it to if you are considering publishing. This is a writers forum that several people from IW frequent, as well as others. Perhaps posting a topic or two there might find you someone to help you, though it;s only a suggestion. [img]smile.gif[/img]