Lovely and very touching, Ryan.

shouldn't I change the ending? I mean it is like saying that she is still in love with me and asking if she still thinks that I am still in love with her... I mean... bah help me!

thanks for the advice HArk, the compliment Reeka [img]smile.gif[/img]

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shouldn't I change the ending? I mean it is like saying that she is still in love with me and asking if she still thinks that I am still in love with her... I mean... bah help me!
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women sure is hard to understand eh?? [img]smile.gif[/img] dont worry your not the only one. during my own time of crisis, and when i wrote those two poems, i wanted the past (the time i spent with her... all the good times) never to change, yet time always changes and so do people. when she went to college, i was never as close anymore with her. when i went to college (where she also studies) she had her own barkada. it really took me time to tell myself that change was already there although i refused to see it. it took me time to tell myself that we can still be friends. it was hard for me to tell this and took me a couple of weeks to bang it into my head. maybe your feeling what i went through?

i am feeling what you are feeling and worse I am sure of it ;)

anyways thanks for your time man.. your helping a lot ;)

come on guys I need more input

"to send or not to send, that is the question" [img]smile.gif[/img]

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come on guys I need more input

"to send or not to send, that is the question" [img]smile.gif[/img] <hr></blockquote>


<font color="cyan">The day still passes and I still await for you;
I know you have somebody that you love true.
But I will wait even if it breaks me in two;
coz’ my love is really meant for you.</font>

Hope this is a good one to end your poem( I don’t know if this is good or it sucks [img]graemlins/question.gif[/img] )

My advice to you is to give it to her, its really hard if you have something that you want to do and cant do it.( I know the feeling man. [img]graemlins/erm.gif[/img] ). You wont lose anything if you try. Anyway good luck to you fellow Pinoy. :D :D :D


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<font color="red"><font size=3>Sir Curian</font>
<font color="blue"><font size=2>Protector of Good</font></font></font>
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thanks man!

I will send it to her... :D

Gee, looks like you had your mind made up fom the beggining Bahumut. [img]smile.gif[/img] Let's hope you have better luck than I do. [img]tongue.gif[/img] Oh it was a beautiful poem btw!

well I was looking if you guys would say no, but you guys said send it so I will... [img]smile.gif[/img]

Thanks RedBlue! I mean I am not expecting anything... but hell, who knows? :D